CV's

My CV before the lesson:

In the lesson we had Sarah come in and explain to us what to put in our CV and what not to put in our CV. She also taught us what order to put our CV's in. Whilst taking notes in class I then updated my CV using all of the information that was given to me. 

My CV after the lesson: 

What I have changed from feedback;
- I have changed the layout of my CV, adding in a profile
- I have learned to take out some things in my starting information as it is not needed
- I have improved my responsibility paragraphs, to include full details of my skills
- I have tidied up my references so they are short and only have the essential information